A revolution is an overthrow of the government or politic system by the people who they govern. Violence is an act of aggression and anger. Violence is never the way for justice; but according to a reactionary violence is the way. They argue violent revolutions are justified because the country they live in would be improved. For example the French revolution of 1789 this was when Louis XVI was overthrown and Republic was put into order.
While a radical disagrees entirely; they oppose any sort of violence. They disagree because there are many revolutions that barley have violence and they have succeeded; for instance The Russian Revolution of 1917 when the February revolution overthrows Tsar Nicholas II in Russia. On they other hand there are some who are undecided like the moderates. So who are right the moderates, radicals or reactionarys?
A revolution is the overthrow of a government or politic system by the people whom they govern. Violence is an act of aggression and anger. Violence is never the way for justice; but according to a reactionary, violence is the way. They argue violent revolutions are justified because the country they live in would be improved. For example the French revolution of 1789 , this was when Louis XVI was overthrown and Republic was put into order.
While a radical disagrees entirely; they oppose any sort of violence. They disagree because there are many revolutions that barley have violence and they have succeeded; for instance The Russian Revolution of 1917 when the February revolution overthrows Tsar Nicholas II in Russia. ( the previous section does not make sense in light of what you have said previously.) On they other hand there are some who are undecided like the moderates. So who are right the moderates, radicals or reactionarys?
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You need to reorganize. You have not said what moderates would do to change government. Are radicals and reactionaries the same? Take a sheet of paper and separate it into moderates and radicals... write what each does to change the status quo. Then you can have a better organized paper when you write it.
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To review your terms, see:
http://www.usnewsclassroom.com/resources/activities/act010604.html
You also need to make better use of commas.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_comma.html
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_commaproof.html
In the future, if nobody is available to proofread your work, you can do this yourself. After writing your material, put it aside for a day — at least several hours. (This breaks mental sets you might have that keep you from noticing problems.) Then read it aloud as if you were reading someone else's work. (Reading aloud slows down your reading, so you are less likely to skip over problems.)
If your reading goes smoothly, that is fine. However, wherever you "stumble" in your reading, other persons are likely to have a problem in reading your material. Those "stumbles" indicate areas that need revising.
Once you have made your revisions, repeat the process above. Good papers often require many drafts.
I hope this helps a little more. Thanks for asking.