Milo's first error is in the step where he sets up the equation to find the unit price. The correct approach would be to divide the total cost by the number of pens to find the cost per pen, but it looks like he seems to have incorrectly interpreted the unit price calculation.
To find the unit price, Milo should calculate: \[ \text{Unit price} = \frac{1.09 \text{ dollars}}{8 \text{ pens}} = \text{Cost per pen} \]
Instead, it appears he incorrectly wrote that \[ \frac{8 \text{ pens}}{1.09 \text{ dollars}} = \frac{\text{question mark}}{1 \text{ dollar}}, \] which implies a multiplication or some form of incorrect manipulation since he did not properly divide the total cost by the number of pens.
Therefore, the correct answer to your question is: He wrote the unit rate incorrectly.