In the small town of Rockport, Maine, there was a boy named Travis who loved to spend his days exploring nature. One day, while walking through the woods, he came across a strange sight - a fish flopping around in the branches of a tree. Confused but intrigued, Travis carefully approached the tree, wondering how the fish could have ended up there.
As Travis got closer, he could see that the fish was trapped in a piece of plastic that had gotten caught in the branches. Feeling sorry for the helpless creature, Travis carefully climbed up the tree to rescue it. After untangling the fish from the plastic, he gently placed it back into the nearby stream, watching as it swam happily away.
As Travis made his way back home, his mind was racing with questions. How did the fish end up in the tree in the first place? And was there something he could do to prevent it from happening again? Determined to find answers, Travis decided to do some research on pollution and its effects on marine life.
After spending hours reading about the dangers of plastic pollution, Travis realized that he needed to take action. He gathered his friends and together they organized a cleanup event in their town, collecting trash from the streets and local waterways. The community was inspired by their efforts and soon joined in, making Rockport a cleaner and safer place for all its inhabitants.
Months passed and Travis continued to work tirelessly to raise awareness about the importance of protecting the environment. His efforts were recognized by a local environmental organization, who invited him to speak at a conference about the impact of pollution on marine ecosystems. Travis' passion and dedication inspired others to take action, creating a ripple effect that spread throughout the town and beyond.
In the end, Travis had not only saved a fish from a tree, but he had also sparked a movement that would make a lasting impact on the world around him. As he looked out at the clear blue waters of the stream, Travis knew that he had found his calling - to protect and preserve the beauty of nature for generations to come.
a four hundred word narrative STORY on fish in the tree by Lynda mullaly hunt
rules
five sentences each paragraph
Plot:The plot is clear and logical.
The plot is supported by strong details.
Dialogue:Dialogue clearly shows individual characters’ personality and attitudes.
Organization:There is a clear and effective organizational structure.
The exposition and resolution are effective.
Ideas are organized logically.
Word Choice:The vocabulary is clearly appropriate for the audience and purpose.
Words are used effectively.
Writing is rich, with a variety of academic and domain-specific words.
Conventions, Formatting.There is a strong command of conventions. Punctuation, capitalization, and spelling are consistently correct.
Dialogue is punctuated correctly.
MLA formatting is correct.
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