To create cohesion between the ideas in the two sentences, you could add the phrase "Because of their energetic nature," at the beginning of the second sentence. This would change the second sentence to: "Because of their energetic nature, beagles have lots of energy for playing." This connection emphasizes that the beagle's suitability as a pet for families with children is largely due to its energy.
A beagle makes the best pet for a family with children. Beagles have lots of energy for playing.
Which phrase could be added to the beginning of the second sentence to create cohesion between the ideas in These sentences?
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