Question

can someone help take out the fragments

Most Americans take the humble hamburger for granted. In actuality, it has a long and interesting history. The burger originated in Russia during the Middle Ages. When a group of Mongolian Tartars shredded some raw meat scraps and ate them. Later they gave this new delicacy to some German sailors. Who had sailed into Baltic ports. After leaving these ports with the recipe. The sailors introduced the raw meat mixture to the people of Hamburg, Germany. Because these people did not like raw meat. They broiled the shredded meat patty.

Answer 1

These are the fragments.

When a group of Mongolian Tartars shredded some raw meat scraps and ate them.

Because these people did not like raw meat.

Answer 2

re(ms.sue) so how would i correct the paragraph?

Answer 3

I missed a couple of fragments.

Who had sailed into Baltic ports.

After leaving these ports with the recipe.

One way to fix the paragraph is to join a fragment with a complete sentence.

Example:

The burger originated in Russia during the Middle Ages when a group of Mongolian Tartars shredded some raw meat scraps and ate them.