Question

Please revise this sentance:
That we the Australian people are becoming to excessively like the United States of America

Thanks
Minerva

Answer 1

The Australian people are becoming too much like people in the United States of America.

Answer 2

Ok. What about this...
The Australian people are undergoing a change making the Australian people excessivly like the United States of America.

Answer 3

So what I put down is right? Should it be:
The Australian people are undergoing a change making the Australian people excessivly like the people of the United States of America.