Have you got your health checked? We have to go the hospital to get your medical certificate. After the<~~delete "the" 5th period, let's go out. He doesn't seem to have classes after 5th period(class)<~~delete "(class)". Since I don't have classes either, we can go out to do several things. I'll write down what to do and the destination in the official trip book. I have to enter the information in Neice, which is a program for the employee in our field. After that let's go to the immigration office to get the alien registration card. Then we should go to the cell phone agency to open your cell phone account. Then we need to go to a store to buy a 21-inch TV. We can buy a 21-inch TV for about 140,000 won, and we can arrange to have the TV delivered to your home. Here is a cell phone agencey. Let's go inside and open your cell phone account. You have to pay the bill for a cell phone. What kind of cell phon<~~sp? do you have in mind. Look at the cell phones on display and choose one. The cell phone price is not supported by the Education Baord.
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Have you got your health checked? We have to go the hospital to get your medical certificate. After the 5th period, let's go out. He doesn't seem to have classes after 5th period(class). As I don't have classes as well, we can go out to do several things. I'll write down what to do and the destination in the official trip book. I have to enter the information in Neice, which is a program for the employee in our field. After that let's go to the immigration office to get the alien registration card. Then we should go to the cell phone agency to open your cell phone account. Then we need to go to a store to buy "a 21 inch TV". We have to buy "a 21 inch TV" for about 140,000 won. We can make the TV delivered to your home. Here is a cell phone agencey. Let's go inside and open your cell phone account. You have to pay the bill for a cell phone. What kind of cell phon do you have in mind. Look at the cell phone on display and choose one. The cell phone price is not supported by the Education Baord.
Do you want to buy this one. OK. Good!
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OK. Than you. I corrected the passage according to your directions and added more things to the passage. Would you check the expressions?
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Also -- Board, not Baord.
Do you have an English spell checker on your computer? It would have picked up the two spelling errors.
Do you have an English spell checker on your computer? It would have picked up the two spelling errors.