Remove "I think" in two places. You are writing the paragraph so of course it's what you think!
Find better words to use instead of "nice"<~~which has almost no meaning anymore.
Find a way to summarize the question instead of quoting it exactly.
Add details to prove your point:
~ What was Scrooge like before? How did he act and speak after he "became a nice person"? What made him change?
~ Specifically, which people "around him" became better people, too?
~ What does "better people" mean?
9. Act II of A Christmas Carol: Scrooge and Marley contains several messages. In a paragraph, explain how one of these messages is conveyed in the second act of the play. Include at least two details from the play to support your points:
When one person changes for the better, others are affected for the better.
I think when one person changes for the better, others are affected for the better. When Scrooge became nice he changed the lives of those around him by becoming a not being a greedy person. I think everyone should try to be a better person.
how can it make it better
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thank you
In my opinion, when one person changes for the better, others are affected for the better. When Scrooge became kind he changed the lives of those around him, like Marley. At the beginning of the story Scrooge only thot about money and how he could get what he wanted, but at the end of the story, he tried to help other people get What they wanted to. Also at the beginning of the story, everybody was not as happy because they were always Dealing with Scrooge, But when Scrooge became kind and not greedy it made everybody happier.
is this better
is this better
Much better.
Double check for correcting errors in capitalization and spelling.
Omit "In my opinion" since that's the same thing as "I think"!
Double check for correcting errors in capitalization and spelling.
Omit "In my opinion" since that's the same thing as "I think"!
you spell it thought