Asked by Blaze

Same-sex marriage should be legalized because it is uncivilized to deny homosexuals their civil rights. The Constitution guarantees everyone equal rights and opportunities, however, gays are denied both in terms of marriage.

is this better? I have support in other paragraphs
Answered by Ms. Sue
Yes, this is much better. :-)
Answered by Writeacher
Be sure to put a semicolon (;) after "opportunities" not a comma. Otherwise, it's a run-on.
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