Question

Write a one paragraph essay on how developments in technology influenced the rise and decline of the Assyrian Empire.


The Assyrians were the first to use iron in their weapon works. They used it in spears, swords, shields and armor. They had the most advanced weapons of their time. Which meant they won more battles. When deep water blocked their passage, engineers would span the rivers with pontoons, or floating structures used to support a bridge. Before attacking, the
Assyrians dug beneath the city’s walls to weaken them

Answer 1

OK., except you have one incomplete sentence.

Answer 2

To expound on Ms. Sue's comment, principally the "sentence" : Which meant they won more battles. So, you could combine this sentence with the previous sentence by replacing the period with a comma.

Answer 3

Thanks. @Knights.
But, is that all I should have in my essay? Should I add anything?
Please help?

Answer 4

Of course, you could add more if you want.