Asked by Blaze

The Secular Student Alliance will resume their meetings on January 13th, 2013. Again at the Bernhard Center in the Martin Luther King room 214 at 4:00 PM. Erdman says big their primary wish is to bring more people into the group, even those who are not atheist or agnostic. The more diverse, the better.

how about this one? It's saying my last sentence is a fragment.. how can I improve that?
Answered by Ms. Sue
This is also a fragment:
"Again at the Bernhard Center in the Martin Luther King room 214 at 4:00 PM."

This doesn't make any sense. Did you reverse a couple of words?
"Erdman says big their primary wish is to bring more people into the group, "

How do you think you can correct the last sentence?


Answered by Blaze
*Again the meeting will take place at the Bernhard Center in the Martin Luther King room, room 214 at 4:00 PM.

*Erdman says they hope more people will join the group

The more diverse the viewpoints are the better?
Answered by Ms. Sue
That's still a fragment.

Erdman wants diverse points of view.

Answered by Blaze
what about the others I corrected?
Answered by Ms. Sue
Omit "Again" at the beginning of the sentence. The rest is correct.
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