Asked by Laruen
Please check my paragraph to see if it's good. If there any detials I should add please let me know. Also please let me know if there any grammar errors.
Obama Win
When Barack Obama was re-elected I was ecstatic. Obama is a really good president and he deserve to be president for the second term. For the past 4 years he done some great achievements. For example, he killed Osama Bin Laden. He didn't EXACTLY killed him but he ordered the United States special forces military unit to kill him. He wants to make sure everyone has access the "American Dream". For the next 4 years I just know he's going to complete his goals.
Obama Win
When Barack Obama was re-elected I was ecstatic. Obama is a really good president and he deserve to be president for the second term. For the past 4 years he done some great achievements. For example, he killed Osama Bin Laden. He didn't EXACTLY killed him but he ordered the United States special forces military unit to kill him. He wants to make sure everyone has access the "American Dream". For the next 4 years I just know he's going to complete his goals.
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Answered by
Ms. Sue
Looks good.
Do you see the one small correction you should make in the second sentence?
Do you see the one small correction you should make in the second sentence?
Answered by
Laruen
yes, I'll rephrase that.
Thank You! :)
Thank You! :)
Answered by
Ms. Sue
You only need to add an "s" to "deserve."
He DESERVES to be president.
He DESERVES to be president.
Answered by
alexis
please check my my essay okayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy please let me know if there are any wrong let me know
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