Asked by Laruen

He earned most of his fortune in the steel industry. In the 1870s, he founded the Carnegie Steel Company.

is there any details I should add to this paragraph

is about how he make his money
Answered by Ms. Sue
Yes. Two sentences is not a good paragraph for an eighth grader.

Answered by Laruen
I need about 2 or one more sentence

please help!!!!!
Answered by Laruen

my teacher doesn't want a 2 paragraph essay since it's a powerpoint
Answered by Ms. Sue
Goodness, Lauren. With all of the sites I've posted, you should have a ton of details to add to this paragraph -- which should be at least 6 sentences long.

Read! Read! Read!

Answered by Laruen
-_- ok
Answered by Laruen
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