8 Sentences, packed with descriptions, details, and examples. A verbal video of your room.

Question

i am trying to write about my daughters room. need help. my daughters room has a wide closet filled with clothes. frozen pink carpet in front of her white bed. medium oak brown wooded toy box. white book case next to her big wide window. brown dresser filled with her clothes.

Answer 1

The best way to describe a room is to choose a direction.
~ Start at the right of the door and work your way around, counter-clockwise.
or
~ Start at the left of the door and work your way around, clockwise.

Be sure it is written in complete sentences, not just phrases and fragments as your notes are written above.