Question
how can i word this differently:
People advise others to stay clear of the horrible consequences of despair.
People advise others to stay clear of the horrible consequences of despair.
Answers
Ms. Sue
You have two non-specific words -- <i>people</i> and <i>others</i>. What are more specific words you can use in their places?
J
Do I have to make them specific if that is my top sentence for a paragraph that relates back to this thesis: The characters of the novel demonstrate how misery drives people to do things they would not normally do.
Ms. Sue
Yes, I think you do have to use a specific word for <i>people</i>. Who advises others to avoid despair? Who advises other characters not to lose hope?
J
Okay. Thank you for your help.
Ms. Sue
You're welcome.