Question

how can i word this differently:

People advise others to stay clear of the horrible consequences of despair.

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Ms. Sue
You have two non-specific words -- <i>people</i> and <i>others</i>. What are more specific words you can use in their places?
J
Do I have to make them specific if that is my top sentence for a paragraph that relates back to this thesis: The characters of the novel demonstrate how misery drives people to do things they would not normally do.
Ms. Sue
Yes, I think you do have to use a specific word for <i>people</i>. Who advises others to avoid despair? Who advises other characters not to lose hope?
J
Okay. Thank you for your help.
Ms. Sue
You're welcome.

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