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I am writing my essays and I wrote them but i not know how to start the beginnings of them. this on movie smoke signals. i am writing on themes, but i cant start intro like "in the film .. because someone else be doing that for movie review, so i not know how to start with themes. i want to do something like "there are many compelling themes in this movie that take you on ride through feeling of your own emotions ?
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Ms. Sue
How about --
Many compelling themes in this movie that take you on ride through feeling of your own emotions.
Many compelling themes in this movie that take you on ride through feeling of your own emotions.
Mohammad
thanks ms. sue :)
Ms. Sue
You're welcome --
A correction -- eliminate "that" and "feeling of".
Many compelling themes in this movie take you on ride through your own emotions.
A correction -- eliminate "that" and "feeling of".
Many compelling themes in this movie take you on ride through your own emotions.
Mohammad
Thanks ms. sue :)
Ms. Sue
You're welcome, Mohammad.