What is your thesis statement? What do you intend to prove in this project?
Also -- we'd appreciate it if you'd proofread before you post. It would be easier for us -- and would certainly make you look more competent.
I am working on a research project. I am concerned about my opening paragraph. Could anyone read this to see if it makes sense. My topic is C. Diff.
In 2009 according to the CDC and US Deparmtne of Social Secirty there were 2,437,163 people that died that year. During 2009, automobile accidents account for 76,309 of those deaths, and 47,311 involve drugs or alcohol in some manner. While no one can live forever, many deaths can be prevent. Even when you are doing everything right, seeing the doctor like you should. Touch the door at your doctor's office you can come in contact with Clostridium Difficile (C.Diff)is preventable illness/death.
Some spelling could be wrong but I will deal with that I am not sure about the rest.
Any help would be great!
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