Asked by Laruen
I'm creating is HUGE book series. Can you check to see if the blurb is good.
The series follows the journey of a teenage girl who is determined to have best year ever in the 8th grade and to have the best 4 year experience in high school.
Please make sure if they any grammar errors. If you have any ideas of making it better I'm ok with it.
Thank You! :)
The series follows the journey of a teenage girl who is determined to have best year ever in the 8th grade and to have the best 4 year experience in high school.
Please make sure if they any grammar errors. If you have any ideas of making it better I'm ok with it.
Thank You! :)
Answers
Answered by
Ms. Sue
It looks good, but I'd say,
"have the best year . . ."
"best four-year experience . . ."
"have the best year . . ."
"best four-year experience . . ."
Answered by
Laruen
that's good
thanks
I just add a few more sentences in the blurb.
thanks
I just add a few more sentences in the blurb.
Answered by
Laruen
The series follows the journey of a teenage girl who is determined to have best year in the 8th grade and to have the best four-year experience in high school.
As you read throughout the series you'll get to understand the real truth about teenage life, can relate the problems and things she been through, experiences you can relate, advice to make good decisions in life and to remember your experiences during your teen years! :)
is that good??
is there any grammar errors??
As you read throughout the series you'll get to understand the real truth about teenage life, can relate the problems and things she been through, experiences you can relate, advice to make good decisions in life and to remember your experiences during your teen years! :)
is that good??
is there any grammar errors??
Answered by
Ms. Sue
You ignored my advice for adding "the."
Answered by
Ms. Sue
Have you written this series or even one book yet? Blurbs are usually written after a book is written.
Answered by
Laruen
Oh ok.
I didn't ignore your adivce I must of been a typo or maybe I erase it by mistake.
I didn't write the book yet. It's a lot to explain. I only wrote the blurb because that's what this whole series mainly about but I may change it after I write the book.
Thanks anyway for editing it! :) :) :)
I didn't ignore your adivce I must of been a typo or maybe I erase it by mistake.
I didn't write the book yet. It's a lot to explain. I only wrote the blurb because that's what this whole series mainly about but I may change it after I write the book.
Thanks anyway for editing it! :) :) :)
Answered by
Ms. Sue
You're welcome.
Answered by
bobpursley
Lauren: Please practice spelling <b> grammar</b> correctly. http://public.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/grammar.html
Answered by
anisha
here its good but u must write through where u wrote throughout . And it's nice
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