Question
We are looking for suitable accommodation in south-west Ireland. (on seafront, near Cork) Any ideas?
Can you check these two sentences, Writeacher?
1) Does your hotel offer both a kids’club and a playground where my child can spend time outside?
2) It is important that the hotel offes a fully supervised children's summer camp as well as a playground where my child can spend time outside.
Can you check these two sentences, Writeacher?
1) Does your hotel offer both a kids’club and a playground where my child can spend time outside?
2) It is important that the hotel offes a fully supervised children's summer camp as well as a playground where my child can spend time outside.
Answers
Writeacher
Some potential revisions for you ~
1) Does your hotel offer organized children's activities, with both inside and outside capabilities?
2) It is important that the hotel offes a fully supervised children's summer camp, as well as a playground where my child can spend free time outside.
1) Does your hotel offer organized children's activities, with both inside and outside capabilities?
2) It is important that the hotel offes a fully supervised children's summer camp, as well as a playground where my child can spend free time outside.
Writeacher
http://www.cork-guide.ie/
http://www.tripadvisor.co.uk/Tourism-g186598-County_Cork-Vacations.html
I'd be all over these websites to find the right hotel in the right place!!
http://www.tripadvisor.co.uk/Tourism-g186598-County_Cork-Vacations.html
I'd be all over these websites to find the right hotel in the right place!!