Question

My favorite Pet
My favorite per in the shop is a parrot,
It is green and yellow.
It has a long beak.
It is chirping now.
I like it very much.

My favorite Pet
My favorite per in the shop is a lizard.
It is green and ugly.
It has a long tail.
It is creeping on a branch now.
I like it very much.

My favorite Pet
My favorite per in the shop is a squirrel.
It is brown and white.
It has a very long tail.
It is playing with his nest now.
I like it very much.

(Would you check the writings? Are they all grammatical? If you find unsuitable expressions, correct them, please.)

Answer 1

In the second line of each set of sentences, use "pet" instead of "per." I think that was just a typo, but it still needs correcting.

In the parrot sentences, I'd use "talking" instead of "chirping."

In the squirrel sentences, I'd use "in his nest" rather than "with his nest."

Everything else is fine.