What is the correct way to write sentence 2?
A.
When she had volunteered to help Grandma clean out her attic. She had hoped there would be something wonderful hidden in its dusty corners.
B.
She had volunteered to help Grandma clean out her attic and at the time had hoped. That there would be something wonderful hidden in its dusty corners.
C.
When she had volunteered to help Grandma clean out her attic, she had hoped there would be something wonderful hidden in its dusty corners.
D.
She had volunteered to help Grandma clean out her attic, and at the time, she had hoped there would be something wonderful, it would be hidden in its dusty corners.
1 answer
The correct way to write sentence 2 is:
C. When she had volunteered to help Grandma clean out her attic, she had hoped there would be something wonderful hidden in its dusty corners.
This option is grammatically correct and clearly conveys the intended meaning.
