Question
I urgently need you to check this message I need to include in an email.
Thank you, Writeacher.
1) Our students have started receiving post from their new Irish partners.
It would be nice if you could send me a list of the students participating in the email partnership.
2) It would also be better if each of them wrote a short message to our school mail addrees so that I can match them with my students and they can start emailing to one another.
3) If you want, I can ask my students to use both English and Italian for their messages so that your students can get enough practice of our language, too.
4) A student from my class, ........is a professional chess player and would like to correspond with an Irish student who shares his same interest.
Thank you, Writeacher.
1) Our students have started receiving post from their new Irish partners.
It would be nice if you could send me a list of the students participating in the email partnership.
2) It would also be better if each of them wrote a short message to our school mail addrees so that I can match them with my students and they can start emailing to one another.
3) If you want, I can ask my students to use both English and Italian for their messages so that your students can get enough practice of our language, too.
4) A student from my class, ........is a professional chess player and would like to correspond with an Irish student who shares his same interest.
Answers
Writeacher
1. posts (plural) -- or do you mean they've started receiving email from...
(Posts are what you find on message boards, like here at Jiskha; email messages are different.)
4. commas before and after the chess player's name
Everything else looks good. =)
(Posts are what you find on message boards, like here at Jiskha; email messages are different.)
4. commas before and after the chess player's name
Everything else looks good. =)