Question
Which of the following is the best way to rewrite this?
F.Sometimes the Coffins helped disguise themselves by putting elegant clothing on the travelers.
G.The Coffins sometimes helped themselves by disguising the travelers in elegant clothing.
H.Sometimes the Coffins helped the travelers disguise themselves by giving them elegant clothing to wear.
J.The travelers sometimes helped the Coffins by putting on elegant clothing to disguise themselves.
F?
F.Sometimes the Coffins helped disguise themselves by putting elegant clothing on the travelers.
G.The Coffins sometimes helped themselves by disguising the travelers in elegant clothing.
H.Sometimes the Coffins helped the travelers disguise themselves by giving them elegant clothing to wear.
J.The travelers sometimes helped the Coffins by putting on elegant clothing to disguise themselves.
F?
Answers
running.from.myself
This is the regular sentence I have to make better
Sometimes, the Coffins helped the travelers disguise themselves by putting elegant clothing.
Sometimes, the Coffins helped the travelers disguise themselves by putting elegant clothing.
Ms. Sue
What is the original sentence?
Ms. Sue
I disagree. The travelers wear the elegant clothing.
Ms. Sue
Yes. H is correct.
running.from.myself
Thanks Ms.Sue
Ms. Sue
You're welcome, Running.