Question

These are other sentences I need you to check, Writeacher. Thank you.

1) Lady Macbeth was tired to be (better: of being ) just Lady Macbeth because she really wanted to be the queen (queen).
2) "Lady Macbeth is a very strong character because she ignored his husband advice and he set up for a murder: the Duncan's murder" .
3) Correction: Lady Macbeth is very determined and ignores her husband's doubts and hesitations about murdering Duncan.
4) "During a night Macbeth was very frightened because he didn't want kill Duncan, but he did it; otherwise Lady Macbeth would be very angry with him."
Correction: On the night of the murder Macbeth hesitates about whether to kill Duncan but his wife helps him to overcome his doubts.
5) "Elizabeth I managed to make England a seafaring and commercial power and a rich state.
"As a political weapon she never got married". Better: she never got married and used it as a political weapon to encourage the hopes of European princes.

Answer 1

1) Lady Macbeth was tired of being just Lady Macbeth. She really wanted to be queen.

3) Lady Macbeth is very determined and ignores her husband's doubts and hesitations about murdering Duncan.

4) On the night of the murder, Macbeth hesitates about whether to kill Duncan, but his wife helps him to overcome his doubts.

5) Elizabeth I managed to make England a seafaring and commercial power, as well as a rich state.

She never married; she used her unmarried state as a political weapon to encourage the hopes of European princes.