Question

Can someone correct this for me?

I have recently found a number of business materials, including but not limited to information pertinent to our group project. On Saturday, I will attempt to scan, attach, and send via email some information that can help us gain a better understanding of a product life cycle.

Answer 1

I have recently found a number of business materials, including but not limited to<b><~~delete "but not limited to" -- it's stuffy.</b> information pertinent to our group project. On Saturday, I will <b>email you some information</b> that can help us gain a better understanding of a <b>product's</b> life cycle.

<b>The changes I'm suggesting are to take out the stuffiness!

=)</b>

Answer 2

Thank you!