Asked by Ricky
I want to know what is wrong in the following sentence:
After six months on the job, he faced problems in his first recruitment effort; however, if he solves these problems, the new hires should be able to start working by July.
After six months on the job, he faced problems in his first recruitment effort; however, if he solves these problems, the new hires should be able to start working by July.
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Answered by
Writeacher
You have switched verb tenses.
Answered by
Writeacher
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/consistency.htm
Answered by
Alison
hires sounds a little awkward. i think hirees should be placed in there instead of hires
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