Question

My, My, My

My, My, My
The World running by
Way too fast fo your eye
Could we slow it down
Just to say goodbye
Or am I even justified because of all the lies
Could we slow it down
Or will we just die

My, My, My
I will miss my life as the days go by
And yet, I still wont cry

I had to write a poem for my literature class. How is this? Do you like it?

Answer 1

It would work for me but I'm not a literature critic. I might substitute a question mark for the period after die.

Answer 2

OK. Thank you. I just don't want to turn it in and get a "F"