Question

Revise and edit the following run-on sentence:

Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced, the producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business records.


Is this right can you please check and let me know

Answer 1

Where is your revised sentence?

Answer 2

Data in computerized form is discoverable, even if paper "hard copies" of the information have been produced. The producing party can be required to design a computer program to extract the data from its computerized business records.

Answer 3

Good.