Question

Thank you very much. I will certainly use the information from the website you suggested to me.
As I need to translate a grid into English, I can't vary words. Could you please tell me if the words I included are possible in English?
Thank you.

Content:
Grammar and vocabulary accuracy:
Cohesion: (use of appropriate sentence connectors, critical awareness and logical copacity)


By the way, can you suggest a website where pupils can practice writing cohesive paragraphs (using sentence connectors etc.) in English?

Writeacher
The websites are there to give you ideas about layout and wording other than what you have listed above. Use whatever you need; ignore the rest.

Yes, the terminology you have given for the grid is fine.

Here are some websites with excellent explanations:

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/transitions.htm

http://www.writing.utoronto.ca/advice/planning-and-organizing/paragraphs

http://www.wju.edu/arc/handouts/paragraphs.pdf

http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/paragraphs.shtml