Question

Shall I replace "you" with "people" or "we"? Thank you.


1.This newspaper article is about job satisfaction. It claims that the root of job satisfaction lies in people's attitude and expectations.
2) First, it is essential to consider the kind of approach to work people have.
It is believed that there are three basic approaches to work depending on whether we are working at a job, a career or a passion.
3) If we work at a career, the prospect of promotion and development opportunities are what appeals us most to our job.
4) If we work at a passion, it is the work itself that determines our motivation and satisfaction. Finally, if we work at a job, then it is the financial aspect that matters us most. 5) Job satisfaction is probably a mixture of the above-mentioned approaches.

Answer 1

Replacing with "people" or "a person" is excellent.

1. OK

2. First, it is essential to consider the kind of approach to work people have. It is believed that there are three basic approaches to work depending on whether a person is working at a job, a career, or a passion.

3. If a person works at a career, the prospect of promotion and development opportunities are the most appealing.

4. If a person works at a passion, it is the work itself that determines his or her motivation and satisfaction. Finally, if a person works at a job, then it is the financial aspect that matters most.

5. OK