Asked by joe

Hi again :) how does this sentence look?

Through his accounts, he describes how the economic status of Jewish immigrants suffered greatly due to their race.
Answered by bobpursley
Hmmm. What do you mean by "look"?
Answered by joe
Sorry ms.sue was helping me before, I mean is the sentence grammatically correct and basically does it sound good?
Answered by Ms. Sue
Your sentence is correct. However, the old question is whether Jews should be considered a race or religion. If the book emphasizes race, then you're right.

Answered by joe
yep it focuses on race, social economic statuses and what not. thank you
Answered by Ms. Sue
You're welcome.