Question

I'm writing an essay and to me my opening sentence could be worded better or is a run on. Please help.

Although it’s difficult to a chose a particular event or person that had the greatest impact on western civilization, the rule of Constantine the Great was a figure that stood out.

Answer 1

I meant choose* not chose by the way.

Answer 2

<i>Although there are many events and people that have had great effects on western civilization, Constantine the Great was a figure who stands out.</i>

1. Making the introductory clause positive rather than negative works better.

2. "the rule of Constantine" was not a figure.

Answer 3

Yeh that's why i said Constantine the Great, but what do you mean by your first statement. How would I change the sentence then?

Answer 4

Please reread what I posted. I changed your sentence.

Answer 5

Sorry I'm half asleep, thanks.