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The story of "The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race" teaches a few lessons. What lesson does it teach about cheating?
1- The story of The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race teaches that even if you get what you want, and win you will always get what you deserve.
The turtle won the race without working hard. If a person doesn’t work hard he/she will definitely get what they deserve. It is like seeing the results of building a house without working hard on it, and building it right.
Thanx
1.
The story of "The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race" teaches a few lessons. What lesson does it teach about cheating?
1- The story of The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race teaches that even if you get what you want, and win you will always get what you deserve.
The turtle won the race without working hard. If a person doesn’t work hard he/she will definitely get what they deserve. It is like seeing the results of building a house without working hard on it, and building it right.
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Let's take these sentences apart:
The story of The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race <b><~~Put the title in quotation marks and delete the words <i>The story of</i> </b>
teaches that even if you get what you want, and win you will always get what you deserve. <b><~~convoluted and misplaced comma; how can you say this more simply -- AND put the comma(s) in the right places?
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm </b>
The turtle won the race without working hard. <b><~~OK</b>
If a person doesn’t work hard he/she will definitely get what they deserve. <b><~~pronoun/antecedent error; unclear response: does "work hard" equate good results? or bad results? or what?
" target="_blank">http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/pronouns.htm</b>
It is like seeing the results of building a house without working hard on it, and building it right. <b><~~Misplaced comma -- and unclear -- do you mean that the house will be well built? or badly built? or unfinished? or what? Don't leave things like this to your readers to conclude. They are not mindreaders.</b>
The story of The Turtle and the Rabbit Run a Race <b><~~Put the title in quotation marks and delete the words <i>The story of</i> </b>
teaches that even if you get what you want, and win you will always get what you deserve. <b><~~convoluted and misplaced comma; how can you say this more simply -- AND put the comma(s) in the right places?
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm </b>
The turtle won the race without working hard. <b><~~OK</b>
If a person doesn’t work hard he/she will definitely get what they deserve. <b><~~pronoun/antecedent error; unclear response: does "work hard" equate good results? or bad results? or what?
" target="_blank">http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/pronouns.htm</b>
It is like seeing the results of building a house without working hard on it, and building it right. <b><~~Misplaced comma -- and unclear -- do you mean that the house will be well built? or badly built? or unfinished? or what? Don't leave things like this to your readers to conclude. They are not mindreaders.</b>
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