It should be good because you've used my words almost entirely. Laruen -- that's plagiarism!
In last paragraph beginning with "Finally," you have a misspelled word and a sentence fragment.
Please check this letter if it's good and if there any grammar mistakes.
My most exalted Monarch - Your Majesty Queen Isabella,
I am writing this letter most humbly for you to consider my request for three small ships and a crew so that I may sail west and find the shortest route to the East. I promised to chaim land for Spain and bring back riches. I will present my reasons for my request.
First, it’s quicker to reach Asia by sailing west. As we know the earth is round. When I proposed to reach India by sailing west from Spain, I knew that the earth was round. I believed that sailing west would be quicker than going around Africa. I calculated the size of the earth and found that distance to Asia is shorter if you go west. I research and studied all the existing maps to prove my theory. We will be able to beat Portugal to the riches of Asia.
Furthermore, in return I will bring you back the amount you gave me and more. With the money I will bring back you’ll have the money to pay for a larger military and ships. With the military and the ships you’ll take over other countries. This will make Spain more powerful and make your country strong.
Finally, I promised I'd covert natives to Christianity. To save their souls and bring blessings the Queen. In addition, I will bring religious rewards to the priests who converted the natives.
I hope the reasons I have listed above will convince you to give me your support.
Your most grateful and respectful servant,
Christopher Columbus
Thank You!!!!
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NO!
I did NOT use most of your words the other 2 i used my notes for info, AND did it as a CLASS AND a teacher today HELP ME!
YOU help me on the last paragraph becuase I couldn't think of anymore reason I tried using my not
I DID NOT PLAGIZE !!!
I did NOT use most of your words the other 2 i used my notes for info, AND did it as a CLASS AND a teacher today HELP ME!
YOU help me on the last paragraph becuase I couldn't think of anymore reason I tried using my not
I DID NOT PLAGIZE !!!
i MEAN I TRIES USING MY NOTES
ALSO U HELP ME ON THE LAST SUPPORTING DEATIL FOR THE 2ND PARAGRAPH!
ALSO U HELP ME ON THE LAST SUPPORTING DEATIL FOR THE 2ND PARAGRAPH!
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