Question
restate the sentence
Annually, millions of animals suffer and die in painful tests in order to determine
the safety of cosmetics.
Annually, millions of animals suffer and die in painful tests in order to determine
the safety of cosmetics.
Answers
Writeacher
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drwls
A dangling adverb (annually), separated by a comma, is an acceptable but awkward way to start a sentence. Try adding "each year" somewhere else in the sentence, or move "annually" to after "tests" or "die".
Steve
I think after "die" is a better choice, since it places the modifier closer to the verb.