Asked by jess
restate the sentence
Annually, millions of animals suffer and die in painful tests in order to determine
the safety of cosmetics.
Annually, millions of animals suffer and die in painful tests in order to determine
the safety of cosmetics.
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Answered by
Writeacher
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Answered by
drwls
A dangling adverb (annually), separated by a comma, is an acceptable but awkward way to start a sentence. Try adding "each year" somewhere else in the sentence, or move "annually" to after "tests" or "die".
Answered by
Steve
I think after "die" is a better choice, since it places the modifier closer to the verb.
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