Question

Can you help me check these sentences, please? I included the words I'm unsure of before the question marks. Thank you.

1)I find it (reading books) rather boring and sometimes a little too far away from the real world. I like reading science and history books instead.
2) I go to the gym three times a week because I do calisthenics. (is the word correct?) in a dance (?) group called ...... Four times a year we have a competition against other sports societies (??? Sports clubs)
3)I’ve got a twin sister and she attends this high school, too. My father works for Ferrero (a confectionary industry).
4)I like sports; my favourite one is football. I’m a bit shy but I like staying with my friends.
5) I’m also generous, quite kind, well-bred and silent. I like helping my mum at home: for example I tidy my room and I dry the dishes.I like Italian food but I hate beans, onion and Indian food.
6) I don’t like singing or waking up early. I don’t like playing video games.
I don’t like history and fake (?) people.

Answer 1

1) I find reading novels rather boring and sometimes a little too far away from the real world. I like reading science and history books instead. [If you don't include "reading novels" or other type of book, you'll contradict yourself!]

2) I go to the gym three times a week because I do calisthenics with a dance group called ...... Four times a year we have a competition against other sports clubs.

3) I have a twin sister, and she attends this high school, too. My father works for Ferrero, a candy company.

4) I like sports; my favourite one is football. I’m a bit shy, but I like being with my friends.

5) I’m also generous, quite kind, well-bred, and silent. I like helping my mum at home: For example, I tidy my room and I dry the dishes. I like Italian food, but I hate beans, onions, and Indian food.

6) I don’t like singing or waking up early. I don’t like playing video games.
I don’t like history and phony people.

<b>Compare very carefully ...</b>