Question

Thank you very much.These are the last sentences of the day.

1) In photo C an Asian boy is sitting at his desk. His exercise book is open on his desk (in front of him). He holds a book in his hands and seems to be flicking (skimming , thumbing) through it.
2) He is wearing a fuchsia shirt with a three-color striped, button-up, woollen cardigan over it.
3) He is a geaky-looking guy and he is wearing heavy-rimmed glasses. Though he is sitting, I guess he is quiet short and slim. He has got short, dark, straight hair and dark, almond-shaped eyes.
4) He has his hair cut in a fringe. He looks (??) self-confident and happy. He looks like a university student.
5) Photo D portrays (depicts, represents?) Carla Bruni, First Lady of France.
6) She is probably walking on a catwalk as she was a former model.

Answer 1

1. comma after "In photo C"; no need for "in front of him" (it's obvious!); any variation works fine.

2. OK

3. "geeky" (sp); comma after "guy"; do you mean "quiet" or "quite"? There's a MAJOR difference!!

4. use "confident" not "self-confident"

5. "portrays" is best

6. OK