Question

is this senetence put right? or how do i fix it?

Commas are very important to add to a sentence where they are needed because if you don't properly use them, the reader will be confused.

Answer 1

It's very awkwardly phrased. Try this:

It's very important to put commas in a sentence where they are needed so readers are not confused.

Answer 2

You need a comma after needed.

Answer 3

how about

John went to the store, then called Kristy.

Answer 4

That's a run-on sentence. How do you think you can fix it?

Answer 5

john went to the store, then when he got home, he called Kristy.

Answer 6

Nope.

John went to the store, and then called Kristy.