Question

Correct following Sentences:
1. Seeing the barrels, the driver immediately slammed on his brakes.

2. A really well-stocked bookshelf should have classical literature on it as well as important modern works of the current day.

3. China’s enormously huge work population has an effect on the global world of high-tech manufacturing of things.

4. A typical autocross course consists of at least two straightaways, and the rest of the course is made up of numerous slaloms and several sharp turns.

5. At breakfast time, Mehrdad always started his day with cantaloupe, lemon yogurt, and black coffee.

Answer 1

Ooops! You forgot to tell us what YOU THINK. Then someone here will respond.

Answer 2

1. Seeing the barrels the driver slammed on his brakes.
2. A well-stocked bookshelf should have classical literature and important modern works on it.
3. China’s huge population has an effect on the global high-tech manufacturing.
4. A typical autocross course consists of at least two straightaways, numerous slaloms and several sharp turns.
5. Mehrdad always starts his breakfast with cantaloupe, lemon yogurt and black coffee.

Answer 3

1. comma needed

2. good

3. remove "the" -- otherwise it's good.

4. comma needed

5. comma needed

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm

Answer 4

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