Please check for any errors. Correct them and I would appreciate it. Thanks!!!
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The first error I saw was how you wrote, "English." Only the first letter is capitalized.
http://www.google.com/search?client=ms-rim&hl=en&q=capital%20letters%20grammar%20rules&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8&channel=browser
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This will confirmed your reservation for a sweet of four rooms on a non-smoking floor for the dates of July 3-July 9.
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"Will confirmed" are 2 separate tenses. You used past tense and future tense.
"This confirms" is correct.
Right now, it also looks like someone reserved candy. :-) Suite is the word you need.
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As you requested, we will hold your sweet for your late arrival.
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See above.
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Incidentally, we have opened a new mall of shops on the lower floor of the hotel that includes a clothing boutique, a florist, a barbershop, a beauty salon, and a sweet shop.
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This is good, but I would change "sweet shop" to something else (candy store, maybe?!). It looks too much like "sweat shop" when I quickly read it. That is not a good thing to have. :-D
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We look forward to your arrival. Visit our website to see a list of events and services we offer.
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I would say, "Please visit..." Just sounds less demanding
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If there are any way we can serve you, while you are here don’t hesitate to let us know.
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Are-plural
Way-singular
If there is any way we can serve you while you are here, don't hesitate to let us know.
(Notice I moved the comma).
Please check for any errors. Correct them and I would appreciate it. Thanks!!!
This will confirmed your reservation for a sweet of four rooms on a non-smoking floor for the dates of July 3-July 9. As you requested, we will hold your sweet for your late arrival.
Incidentally, we have opened a new mall of shops on the lower floor of the hotel that includes a clothing boutique, a florist, a barbershop, a beauty salon, and a sweet shop.
We look forward to your arrival. Visit our website to see a list of events and services we offer. If there are any way we can serve you, while you are here don’t hesitate to let us know.
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