Question
THESIS
Facebook can have negative approaches such as facebook addicton, unsecure privacy, less social interaction, and causes problems with relationships,therefore i believe facebook should be limited by parents and by the users.
is this a good enough thesis??
Facebook can have negative approaches such as facebook addicton, unsecure privacy, less social interaction, and causes problems with relationships,therefore i believe facebook should be limited by parents and by the users.
is this a good enough thesis??
Answers
MattsRiceBowl
The thesis statement is:
Facebook should be limited by parents and users.
The other things you mentioned are in a different sentence. Take out the "I believe" part. It makes the argument sound much weaker.
Now that I answered, I have to go check my facebook. TTFN
Facebook should be limited by parents and users.
The other things you mentioned are in a different sentence. Take out the "I believe" part. It makes the argument sound much weaker.
Now that I answered, I have to go check my facebook. TTFN