Question

Each person in the choir came from a different background and social class, but were all bound together by the music we practiced.

Answer 1

the we sounds like its in the wrong tense or something.

Answer 2

The "we" sounds wrong because there's a shift in the sentence from 3rd person to 1st. How can you rephrase it and get rid of "we"? What would you substitute?

Answer 3

we -> each of us?

Answer 4

still doesnt sound right

Answer 5

We all came from different backgrounds and social classes, but were all bound together by the music we practiced. Thanks@

Answer 6

We all came from different backgrounds and social classes, but related to each other through the music we practiced.

something seems wrong

Answer 7

Ahhhh, good for you!

=)

Answer 8

nm thanks. sorry for spamming

Answer 9

I think it's fine. The only other way would be to turn it all into 3rd person, but it's not as smooth as what you've written.

<i>Each person in the choir came from a different background and social class, but all were bound together by the music they practiced.</i>

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