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Each person in the choir came from a different background and social class, but were all bound together by the music we practiced.
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the we sounds like its in the wrong tense or something.
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The "we" sounds wrong because there's a shift in the sentence from 3rd person to 1st. How can you rephrase it and get rid of "we"? What would you substitute?
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we -> each of us?
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still doesnt sound right
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We all came from different backgrounds and social classes, but were all bound together by the music we practiced. Thanks@
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We all came from different backgrounds and social classes, but related to each other through the music we practiced.
something seems wrong
something seems wrong
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Ahhhh, good for you!
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nm thanks. sorry for spamming
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Writeacher
I think it's fine. The only other way would be to turn it all into 3rd person, but it's not as smooth as what you've written.
<i>Each person in the choir came from a different background and social class, but all were bound together by the music they practiced.</i>
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<i>Each person in the choir came from a different background and social class, but all were bound together by the music they practiced.</i>
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