Asked by Robert
17 years later, 150 pounds heavier and 5 ½ feet taller, I have gotten used the American way of things, living the majority of my life California and Seattle, Washington.
Does that make sense? I get a fragment line on Word.
Thank you for your help.
Does that make sense? I get a fragment line on Word.
Thank you for your help.
Answers
Answered by
Writeacher
This would be better:
<b>Seventeen years later, 150 pounds heavier and 5 ½ feet taller, I have become used to the American way of doing things, having lived the majority of my life in California and Washington.</b>
Word may still tell you it's a fragment. Who knows why Word's grammar checker does what it does?! It's not a fragment.
If you have question about the changes I made, let me know.
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<b>Seventeen years later, 150 pounds heavier and 5 ½ feet taller, I have become used to the American way of doing things, having lived the majority of my life in California and Washington.</b>
Word may still tell you it's a fragment. Who knows why Word's grammar checker does what it does?! It's not a fragment.
If you have question about the changes I made, let me know.
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Answered by
Robert
I like your way of phrasing things better. It flows a lot better.
Thank you.
Thank you.
Answered by
Writeacher
You're very welcome.
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