Question
In the message portion of your Discussion post, start by writing one general sentence about a topic
After your one general sentence, write three or four sentences that add specifics to your description
Answers
Ms. Sue
What is your topic?
What is a general sentence about it?
What is a general sentence about it?
rita
I don't have one
rita
Today is a good day
Ms. Sue
That's your first sentence.
Now write three or four sentences telling the reader why today is good.
Now write three or four sentences telling the reader why today is good.
Anonymous
Because me and my family are bless to be alive today. Today is such a pretty day. An know one are messing with me are calling me today.
Ms. Sue
Let's see what your paragraph looks like in standard English.
<b>Today is a good day. It's really a pretty day. My family and I are blessed to be alive. In addition, no one is messing with me or calling me today.</b>
A few tips for the next time you write.
1. Do not begin a sentence with "because" or "and."
2. You wouldn't say "me am blessed to be alive." So you can't say "me and my family are blessed . . ."
3. Note the spelling of:
no one
and
or
<b>Today is a good day. It's really a pretty day. My family and I are blessed to be alive. In addition, no one is messing with me or calling me today.</b>
A few tips for the next time you write.
1. Do not begin a sentence with "because" or "and."
2. You wouldn't say "me am blessed to be alive." So you can't say "me and my family are blessed . . ."
3. Note the spelling of:
no one
and
or
Anonymous
Thank you Ms. Sue
Ms. Sue
You're welcome!