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Hilda takes an enormous amount of space, though so little time, in my adolescence. Even today, her memory stirs me; I long to see her again. She was three years older than I, and for a short while all I wanted was to look like, sound like, and dress like her. She was the only girl I knew who told me I wrote excellent letters. She made a plaster cast of my face. She had opinions on everything. She took a picture of me, at sixteen, which I have still. She and I were nearly killed, falling off a hillside road in her small car. Hilda was so full of life, I cannot believe her dead.
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Jennifer
For the topic sentence I came up with Hilda takes an enormous amount of space.

The first detail: In her memory
Second detail: the was three years older that I
Fourth detail: she was the only girl
Fifth detail: She had opinions of everything
Sixth example: She and I were nearly killed falling of a hiss side road in her small car.

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