Can you help me fix this sentence, i can't word it correctly
This era was struck with poverty, ...etc
How can i write that there was poverty in this era..
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There's poverty in every era. Please be more specific.
This era was struck with poverty, living in huts supplied by the lord with low income.
Struck with poverty <-does that sound wrong?
Struck with poverty <-does that sound wrong?
Those are both wrong.
"Struck with poverty" is not correct. In addition you have a classic misplaced modifier. Certainly the lord didn't have a low income! Also the era didn't live in huts.
How about?
The majority of people lived in poverty.
"Struck with poverty" is not correct. In addition you have a classic misplaced modifier. Certainly the lord didn't have a low income! Also the era didn't live in huts.
How about?
The majority of people lived in poverty.
Oh ok i understand where i went wrong.
Thank you
Thank you
You're welcome.
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