Asked by Anonymous
Can you help me fix this sentence, i can't word it correctly
This era was struck with poverty, ...etc
How can i write that there was poverty in this era..
This era was struck with poverty, ...etc
How can i write that there was poverty in this era..
Answers
Answered by
Ms. Sue
There's poverty in every era. Please be more specific.
Answered by
Anonymous
This era was struck with poverty, living in huts supplied by the lord with low income.
Struck with poverty <-does that sound wrong?
Struck with poverty <-does that sound wrong?
Answered by
Ms. Sue
Those are both wrong.
"Struck with poverty" is not correct. In addition you have a classic misplaced modifier. Certainly the lord didn't have a low income! Also the era didn't live in huts.
How about?
The majority of people lived in poverty.
"Struck with poverty" is not correct. In addition you have a classic misplaced modifier. Certainly the lord didn't have a low income! Also the era didn't live in huts.
How about?
The majority of people lived in poverty.
Answered by
Anonymous
Oh ok i understand where i went wrong.
Thank you
Thank you
Answered by
Ms. Sue
You're welcome.