1) I was given a 30% discount on the purchased items.
I paid 30% less than the regular price on those jeans.
How long do January sales last in America? (Usually just the month of January, but some are shorter.
http://www.google.com/search?sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8&q=january+sales )
2)When you go skiing you can choose among one-day, half-day, and weekly tickets. The daily rate amounts to 25£.
3)You can also get a season pass if you want to use it over a longer period of time.
4)I also like skiing off the marked trails though I know it is more dangerous.
5) As I had a stuffed-up nose, the doctor prescribed some nasal drops for me to use three times a day.
6) I always helped my child get washed and dressed in the morning. He can't make himself breakfast, so I also help him with it. I warm up the milk and pour it into a cup. I add some corn flakes to it.
Compare carefully to catch all the large and small changes I made (such as commas).
I forgot to include these few more sentences.Thank you very much.
1) I was given/granted 30% off (discount?) on the purchased items (?).
How long do Janary sales last in America?
2)When you go skiing you can choose among one-day, half-day and weekly tickets. The daily rate amounts to (is of??) 25£.
3)You can also gets a point (?)-ticket if you want to use it over a longer period.
4)I also like skiing off track (??) though I know it is more dangerous.
5) As I had a stuffed-up nose, the doctor prescribed me some nasal drops three times a day (to free the nasal passages??)
6) I always helped my child get washed and dressed in the morning. He can't make himself breakfast so I also help him with it. I warm up the milk and I poured it into a cup. I add some corn flakes to it.
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