Question

Review pp. 517–520. Describe your experience with credit and credit cards in a brief paragraph using at least five adverbs and five adjectives in your description. Bold the adverbs and underline the adjectives


Just wanted to know if this is correct or do I need to revise....

My first(adjective) experience with a credit card was a disaster,leading me quickly(adverb) in debt. I completely(adverb), maxed it out and had an extremely (adverb), hard time keeping up with the monthly(adjective), payments. During this time my credit score suffered drastically(adverb), . Not only that, the extremely(adverb), high (adjective)interest rate added to my stress of trying to get a handle on the debt building up. My impulsive(adjective) decision to get a credit card at an early(adjective),age continues to affect my credit and ability to receive loans.

Answer 1

My first(adjective) experience with a credit card was a disaster, leading<b><~~space after comma; change "leading" to "leaving" </b> me quickly(adverb) in debt. I completely(adverb),<b><~~delete comma</b> maxed it out and had an extremely (adverb),<b><~~delete comma</b> hard time keeping up with the monthly(adjective),<b><~~delete comma</b> payments. During this time my credit score suffered drastically(adverb),<b><~~delete comma</b> . Not only that, the extremely(adverb),<b><~~delete comma</b> high (adjective)interest rate added to my stress of trying to get a handle on the debt building up. My impulsive(adjective) decision to get a credit card at an early(adjective),<b><~~delete comma</b> age continues to affect my credit and ability to receive loans.

<b>In addition, "disaster" and "hard" and "this" and "credit" are adjectives. So is "my" if you want to count it!

Nice job.</b>