Asked by Anonymous
Is this correct?
Here are the main categories: chemical elements games, astronomy games, cell games, Dino might, seasons, life cycles, animal classification and deep sea science.
Here are the main categories: chemical elements games, astronomy games, cell games, Dino might, seasons, life cycles, animal classification and deep sea science.
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Answered by
drwls
It is an acceptable sentence but I had never heard of "Dino might" (until now). If it is a particular copyrighted game or book, it does not quite fit the general categories of the other games and subjects listed.
http://www.amazon.com/Dino-Might-Michael-Burgan-Wenzel/dp/1584760427
http://www.amazon.com/Dino-Might-Michael-Burgan-Wenzel/dp/1584760427
Answered by
Writeacher
DrWLS is correct. If "Dino might" is the name of a particular game and all the others are categories of games, then you need to either make all the parts of that series categories or all specific names of games. If you don't correct this, you have a problem with parallel construction.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm
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Anonymous
Thanks for the help
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