Asked by sanjeevan

She also makes a very important remark that explains Samsara, “You have a good soul, but it’s like you waited your whole life for something”. <<<If we interpret this to the belief the Hindus follow; the cycle in which the soul of all living things trying to reach god, Brahma; has a similar concept. >>>

can you please tell me if the second sentence with the <<<__>>> is gramatically-sentence structure wise okay thank you!!
Answered by Writeacher
The words between the brackets do not make full sentences. They are incomplete and don't make sense.

1. Delete all semicolons (;) - they are not used correctly.

2. Determine what each of the following sections are supposed to say, and then revise so they make sense:

If we interpret this to the belief the Hindus follow <b>What is "this"? You need to insert "according" in front of "to." Do Hindus follow only one belief?</b>

the cycle in which the soul of all living things trying to reach god, Brahma <b>Are you referring to the beliefs regarding reincarnation? If so, be sure to say so. In addition, this part needs a verb; I see only participles and an infinitive.</b>

has a similar concept. <b>This makes no sense to me because I can't make sense of the first two parts.

Please clarify the entire passage.</b>
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